Elodie Turquois
2025/26

Shortlisted writer: Elodie Turquois
My name is Elodie Turquois, and I’m a writer of fantasy and historical fiction based in Scotland, though originally from Paris. Back in high school, I mostly wrote poetry and lyrics for my screamo band (peak millennial). After school I only wrote little bits like blogs and short pieces. Then one summer early in my PhD, bored out of my mind, I started a novel to entertain myself. It was super camp YA – imagine Gossip Girl set in Oxford. I reached 50k but never finished this or any of the novels I started over the next fifteen years, plagued by guilt that I should be writing my research instead of “fun”. When I reached a breaking point with academia in 2022, I threw myself into the first novel I ever finished: a blend of historical fiction and magical realism set in Renaissance Venice. I haven’t looked back since, well and truly hooked.
What is your shortlisted novel about?
Macarons and Monsters is a contemporary cosy fantasy that follows Liv, an overachieving and incredibly rigid British grad student who moves to Paris to attend the Sorbonne. This should be her big chance to reinvent herself, escape her past, and make her name in the field of behavioural anthropology by securing a world-renowned specialist as her supervisor.
Instead, she's assigned to an eccentric folklorist who insists she open herself to what she despises most, and the source of her childhood trauma: disgusting, unpredictable folklore creatures. Her life descends into a chaotic swirl of macarons, monsters, and inconvenient attractions as she slowly learns to see the beauty and sweetness in the whimsy she denied herself for so long.
What has helped you improve as a writer?
Firstly, being diagnosed with ADHD in 2020 helped me understand my strengths and weaknesses much better in both my academic writing and fiction. I also have to credit writing groups and the support I’ve had from various sources, including a one-year scholarship for the Resilient Writers coaching group, which was huge in shifting my mindset around finishing and revisions.
Making writer friends to exchange feedback with has also had a big impact on my craft and confidence. Of course, reading broadly and writing regularly is the best prescription for any budding writer. Lastly, knowing the rules and reading tons of craft books is great, but equally, remember there is “no write way” (to quote VE Schwab’s podcast). Being open and flexible helps a lot; trying different methods can help you out of feeling stuck or overwhelmed. At least, it works for my novelty-seeking brain!
What advice would you give to someone who is considering entering Ascent Novel Prize?
Be bold and try it out! This was the first time I entered Macarons and Monsters anywhere, and I only had a rough draft when I first submitted. It was a novel I’d written purely for myself, an indulgence, without worrying about genre, marketability or any of the concerns that plague me as a querying writer: a true discovery draft.
Follow your gut. If the story makes your heart sing, there’s a good chance it will resonate with others too. Competitions are a great way to get used to sharing your writing, and Ascent is a great one if you’re considering doing so. I’ve been so impressed by the competition’s organisation, how transparent and professional it has been, and by what a lovely community the Top 100 have been. I can heartily recommend it.
Opening Pages
One
The Sorbonne stands across the street exactly as I dreamed it would – marble columns, symmetry, the kind of beauty that makes my chest tighten with anticipation – and I have no idea why they’ve sent me here instead. A narrow, easily missed grey block, more likely to house a dentist or an insurance
broker than the new life I planned. I uncurl my fingers from the slip of paper and check it again, as if the words might rearrange themselves if I stare hard enough. Professeur Lucien Lavigne, 16 rue de la Sorbonne, Office 6B.
My assigned supervisor – an admin mistake I intend to rectify pronto. Why is his office here and not with the rest of anthropology? Maybe this is where the Sorbonne puts the things it no longer knows what to do with.
Inside, a plaque lists departments: Hittitology, Egyptology, Assyriology. Minor disciplines quietly sliding towards obscurity. No anthropology. Still, I follow the instructions the secretary dictated in her dry, faintly contemptuous French.
The stairwell spirals upward, the steps creaking like the servants’ staircase to my attic room in the Marais. By the sixth floor my calves ache and the air tastes of dust. Paint flakes from the walls, half the lights have given up, and the noticeboard is cluttered with flyers five years out of date. Nothing here suggests a place where careers are made. A small library opens before me, empty except for a girl with purple streaks in her
hair, typing furiously beneath flickering light strips. She glances up, expression unreadable, eyes sharp enough to make me straighten without meaning to. As if she knows something I don’t.
I smooth my bob and clear my throat.
“Sorry to disturb you. I’m looking for Professeur Lavigne.”
She tips her head towards a corridor and returns to her screen.
The corridor lies in the peculiar hush of places that have been quietly set aside. The plaque saying Office 6B hangs crookedly from one screw. I knock.
The door swings open before I can gather myself.
Colour hits me first – garish greens, purples, golds – then the scent of tea leaves and marzipan.
Books dominate the room, spilling onto chairs and windowsills. Every patch of wall not claimed by shelving holds something. Nothing labelled or dated. A fox mask edged in gold. A marionette frozen mid-laugh. Paintings that shimmer when I blink. Winged things with too many eyes and teeth.
Light filters through gauzy curtains, catching dust motes like tiny wings suspended midair. For an instant, I could swear one of the paintings moves, and the absurd urge to catalogue it – pin it down – makes my fingers twitch.
“Ah, Mademoiselle Thompson! You made it.”
The man behind the desk rises – long-limbed, slightly rumpled, tie askew as if he’d wrestled it into submission. Too relaxed for someone in charge of my future. Even his precise bowl cut looks ruffled, messy.
I manage a polite nod.
He gestures to a velvet settee buried under papers. “Please, sit. Don’t mind the chaos. It’s organised… in its own way.”
I perch carefully, scanning for evidence of this system. I find none.
“Tea? Coffee?”
“Water, please.”
He disappears through a side door, leaving me under the collective gaze of painted creatures.
They’re not real, just pictures, I tell myself – the way you soothe a frightened child. Which is ridiculous, because I’m not frightened.
He returns with the glass and drags a chair closer, turning it around and straddling it with easy informality – so at odds with his three-piece suit it borders on parody.
“So,” he says. “The Oxford recruit. May I call you Olivia?”
“Liv. Only my mum says Olivia—when she’s cross,” I blurt.
Cross? How old am I, five? I don’t talk like this. Must be this place throwing me off.
“Liv it is. Call me Lucien. Never Luc.” He grins. “Luc sounds like a man who enjoys golf and drives a yellow sports car.”
Despite myself, I laugh – then sober.
“I think there’s been a mistake—”
“You wanted D’Aubigny, didn’t you?”
I did. It was the plan: come to Paris, write a dissertation with D’Aubigny so good he’d take me on for the PhD, then become a world-renowned anthropologist like him, making sense of human behaviour one case study at a time. It was guaranteed to work.
I flush. “He’s… legendary.”
“I understand behavioural anthropology was your focus at Oxford?”
“Yes.”
“Excellent. Admirably dry.” His eyes glint. “You’ll find we do things differently here.”
Different how? Different from peer-reviewed, funded, taken seriously? I clutch the glass tighter. Surely this is still the Sorbonne, even if it’s hiding across the street.
“I’d like you to assist me with some research this semester,” he continues. “I think you’ll be very well suited for this. I may not have been your first choice—but you were always mine.”
I squirm, looking away.
He rummages through a paper avalanche and drops a glossy flier into my lap.
Gaston Beaulieu – Fairies in the Twenty-First Century?
Fairies.
The word crawls under my skin, tugging at something old and unpleasant. The memory of not being believed. Of children’s laughter, cutting like glass. Of adults with patronising, indulgent smiles. The man on the flyer beams up at me, white hair escaping from beneath a sailor’s cap. More Santa than scholar.
“Think of it as fieldwork,” Lavigne says lightly. “Beaulieu’s a self-taught folklorist.
Charming, but maddeningly secretive. He refuses to share his sources.”
“You think he’s hiding something like a private archive?”
“Maybe.” He leans forward. “You see, folklore is anthropology’s unruly child. It deals with how people explain the inexplicable—what frightens them, comforts them.”
His gaze lingers a beat too long.
“You strike me as someone who likes order.”
My fingers tighten around the glass. I don’t know why that feels like an accusation.
“I prefer things that make sense.”
“Of course,” he says gently. “But the world doesn’t always oblige.”
My pulse thuds in my ears. The marionette’s grin seems sharper. Something silver glints on his desk. The urge to catalogue, to contain, returns, fierce and illogical.
“If I do this,” I say carefully, “you’ll let me write my dissertation on behavioural anthropology?”
His grin is immediate. “Absolutely. Cross my folklorist heart.”
I exhale, slow and measured. “Fine. I’ll attend the talk.”
For now. Because this has to be a mistake.
I did everything right. Got a First, secured the glowing recommendation, took the correct modules, wrote the kind of undergrad dissertation people still mention in seminars. Everything to score the famous D’Aubigny. It makes no sense to get this far only to be sidelined, tucked away across the street in this whimsical purgatory.
“Excellent,” Lavigne claps, strangely childlike for a man of about fifty. “It’s tomorrow night. Remember to speak with Beaulieu afterwards.”
I stand, eager to leave before the fox mask decides to wink.
“Thank you, Professeur.”
“Lucien,” he corrects. “And if you need books, find my doctoral student, Toshiko—purple hair, eyes that see straight through you. She all but sleeps in the library.”
“I think I already met her.”
“Splendid. Then you’re practically part of the family.”
“Lucky me,” I murmur.
As I reach the door, something flutters past my shoulder – a paper bird folded from newspaper, gliding briefly before collapsing mid-flight.
Lavigne doesn’t look up. “Ignore that. The office has… character.”
Character? A shiver traces my spine.
The corridor air feels cooler. Safer. The paper bird lies on the carpet, its wings trembling faintly, as if trying to remember how to fly.
I tear my eyes away.
Still half-lost in thought, I push through the heavy door and nearly collide with a man. He sidesteps with impossible ease, catching my elbow to steady me.
“Whoa there,” he says, voice low and amused, his French rough-edged.
I’m still replaying the word folklore, prodding it like a bruise.
I look up into brown eyes crinkled with quiet humour. Oh no. He’s seriously charming. And, annoyingly, absolutely stacked.
“Sorry,” I stammer. “I wasn’t looking.”
“No harm done.” He releases me, his hand leaving behind a ghost of warmth. “First week?”
“Is it that obvious?”
His lips curve. “Welcome to the circus.”
I don’t think to ask what he means until he’s already gone, slipping inside with movements fluid and sure as a dancer’s. Like he belongs here.
I tighten my grip on my bag.
Time to find D’Aubigny and fix this before my academic career turns into a nightmare.